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sometimes my mask breaks
my mask that always smiles
through the cracks... tears flow
another haiku about tears (other here [link] )...though this one is more about masks

i own this is mine

i dont own the pic
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Argentum-Silva Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Sounds like a day in the life of me. Well done. :D
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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Davidpoet30 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
i really like this
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanx and thanx for the fav
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FemzzA Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student General Artist
that represents who I am... cool
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanx...and thanx for the fav
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FemzzA Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Student General Artist
yw :]
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cresun Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
sometimes my heart breaks
my heart that always hides
through the cracks... self-hatred pours
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
that is so perfect...u should post that (if you havent already)
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gothycfliq954 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Short, to the point and meaningful. I like it :)
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanx
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gothycfliq954 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
ur welcome
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
I know how u feel
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punk0000 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Student General Artist
OMGG!Amazing poem, I love it. So far this is the first thing I'm gonna fav. Yay!
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lmao...love you punk
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punk0000 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Ur welcome! :icontongueplz:
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blueheron93 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student Writer
Nice work. :clap:
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
I love the picture. And I love the poem!
This is really very cool!
Thanks for sharing this. :huggle:
We're never really alone.^^

~Josh~
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanx josh and thanx for the fav (the pic is not mine though)
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PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
You're welcome hikaru :)
It's still awesome! :)
Thanks for sharing this! :)

~Josh~
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanx...XD
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:iconpyroshadow18:
PyroShadow18 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
You're welcome^^ :)

~Josh~
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jayceetot Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
*sigh*
yes, i know all about that. :(

well done.
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you...im sorry you feel that way...i hope there is atleast one perosn you can be yourself around
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Kamiisafatbunnie Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Chelsie! You're on the 3rd page :D
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i nooo...XD...im so happy!
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Kamiisafatbunnie Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Chelsie! You're on the 3rd page :D
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MonkiiOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
Why isn't anyone reporting this? It's a stolen picture... :/
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Kamiisafatbunnie Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
They aren't reporting it because the poem is her work.
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MonkiiOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
but the picture isn't.
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Kamiisafatbunnie Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
A lot of people Use images that aren't there's as the thumbnails for their literacy works. It's fine because they are not submitting it as a picture but as a piece of literature.
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MonkiiOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
they still USE it, if you don't get written permission to use it, don't.
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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
and i said that i did not own it
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MonkiiOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
and you cared much...
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MonkiiOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
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